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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-02 01:25 AM



I Believe


I believe
I never
loved anyone
like you
you make
the hair
on my
neck stand
and it
seems that
my breath
is at
your command
I feel
your heat
at the
whisper of
your smoke
one word
of you
strongest desires
have provoked
I feel
you in
the rustle
of leaves
and from
my doubt
I now
truly know
loves touch
and somehow
I believe


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-09-02 02:29 AM


You amaze me with the feelings you pack into a poem.
VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
2 posted 2002-09-02 10:34 AM


passion and ardor hang on every word

well done!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-09-02 10:37 AM


1slick_lady
It's always nice to believe.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-09-02 11:48 AM


helen - always from the heart. A lucky guy he is...

BC

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