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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-09-01 11:36 PM



Half-sleep ignorant to the love
Of hearts spent "standing by"
We pitch them into history fields
And leave them there to die

It's amazing how the lonely hearts
Have so much love to give
But withers away in broken need
Of just one chance to live

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-09-01 11:38 PM


Hello Kris

There are far too many lonely hearts out there, many who see no hope or cannot find the love they desperately crave.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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2 posted 2002-09-02 12:19 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, this is touching, my heart goes out to all these lonely people and I send hugs and sympathy their way in hope they will find love! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-02-2002 12:19 AM).]

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2002-09-02 12:57 PM


You write so nice Kris~
but you know, some things are better left unsaid so that they never have to die!
Like forfeiting a game that you never had to play!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2002-09-02 12:59 PM


definately beautiful!
brian sites
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5 posted 2002-09-02 01:02 AM


kris
this runs
DEEP
my friend
you hold a mirror
up to everyone
I look in mine
and don't always
like what I see
more compassion needed sometimes
this is very good
brian

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