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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-09-01 06:23 PM




The waves lap the shore
Caressing the warm gold sand
As we stand as one together
You take hold of my hand

I move in a little closer
As our fingers interlace
How lost in love I am
When I gaze up at your face

The lonely cry of a seagull
As he flies along the shore
Like the ever returning tide
You keep me coming back for more

The sky has turned to crimson
As the sun begins to set
This day of love and romance
I never will forget

The moon's light will guide us
Of your love, I'll not lose sight
Then we'll dive with reckless abandon
Beneath the covers of the night


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-01 08:28 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I just love how your gorgeous words always reflect the photographs of nature so well, this is excellent, yay!!! You always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
2 posted 2002-09-01 09:48 PM


Whether of a real event or imagination, it is vivid and invigorating.

A finely crafted piece.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-09-01 09:51 PM


This is beautiful and romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
4 posted 2002-09-01 09:52 PM


Just like you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

mycafe
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5 posted 2002-09-01 10:01 PM


Beautiful imagery and words, Sue!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-09-01 10:20 PM


Hi Sue -- We're back from vacation and hubby is not at all ready to resume work!! I love this picture and the poem and may have to take Ron back on vacation to the beaches in Maine!!!

Jonathan did the triathlon this morning in one hour and 27 minutes. He did great and finished 173rd out of 333 in the amateur section and finished 11th in his age group of 18-24 year olds. Not bad for a kid who's never done one of these before. He's one hurting pup though tonight. Legs like rubber.

    Hugs and chat with you soon.  Love, Marti

[This message has been edited by NewEnglandlazurlu (09-02-2002 10:15 PM).]

Paul Wilson
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7 posted 2002-09-02 03:14 AM


Sue... Such a beautiful picture and poem to match. I love to watch sunsets and stretch my neck just to get one more glimpse before the night takes hold...Paul
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8 posted 2002-09-02 08:57 AM


Sue, this is wonderful and the pic is spectacular!  Well done!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-09-02 12:39 PM


Suetang - spectacular photo, warm romantic poem. Every is just right...

BC

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10 posted 2002-09-02 12:43 PM


Yep,  slide under that cover of darkness
as moonbeams glint from the eyes....

Beautiful poem and pic....

Nice one SueT..

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