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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“HAVE YOU EVER” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Have you ever sat there on a moonlit night, wanting to hold her close, to hold her tight? Have you ever looked into her soft eyes, and thought your heart was butterflies? Have you ever sat on the bank of a river, touched her arm and felt yourself quiver? Have you ever sat on the top of a mountain, started kissing her and she had no objection? Have you ever walked the beach together kicking sand, saw the sparkle in her eyes when you held her hand? Have you ever had a picnic in the serene meadow, sat on a blanket with her and felt yourself glow? Have you ever walked with her in a forest of trees, watched as her hair gently flowed in the breeze? Have you ever whispered into her ear sweet nothings, and was gently surprised with the awakenings? Amazing what a loving woman will capture, when one does some of the above with her… ~~~~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ok...i am melted...sponge me up...helen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Have I ever read such great delight as you've penned this starry night and could my heart more fill with smile than when I'm taken by your guile. but soft, tis not the window breaking nor yet the dawn of love's forsaking could words of love lift me up high and fill me with a heartfelt sigh. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I guess some can, and some can't see it...nevertheless, this is a beautiful, thoughtful poem and I enjoyed every line!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill I haven't with her...but with him some, yes. Lovely and romantic thoughts here. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Bill... I gotta ask THE question.. Are you in love ??? Is this where your inspiration comes from? Ya gotta be, to know just what to do.. And if you are, she's lucky, and if you're not, then some one is gonna be lucky when you find the right one! Each read gets better, and better ! Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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maggie Junior Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 15 |
Your poem is lovely. Must be really nice to be a partner of someone who thinks like you do. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling man, the king of romance does it again this is truly wonderful. I love it utterly utterly love it. Always your writing is beautiful and I love this one utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this made me cry because this is sooooooo beautiful and all of the above are things I want to do with my Joanna so very much as she is heaven to me! (big hugggssssss) This is so gorgeous and sensitively romantic, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If I were to replace the word "her" with "him" and "man" with "woman"----then I would have written the perfect love poem for me to give to a man! Simply scrumptious writing! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What can I say? I love this Bill... simply love it...it's magical. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful... Enjoyed DeaDiAmore |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC ~~ This is so beautiful and romantic. And there you go again with that mountain of yours. Thank goodness you put in the beach and the meadow. Now I at least can look for the magic on level ground!!! Hugs, Marti |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Hello Bill. I don't think I've read any of your poems before, but I had to pop in and tell you how much I love this one. Not everyone who falls in love, or is in love sees and feels things like you have described here. Your love is truly blessed to have you in her life. Big hugs!! Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mmmmmm.....ahh.....swoon. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ Just ever so lovely~ Romantic thoughts in action~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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