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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-01 03:15 PM



My Only Sin

when
I am with you
I feel as if
you have
crawled under
my skin
every fiber
of your being
is a place
I have been
each time
we touch
it’s like
we just begin
your heat
stirs a passion
from out
to within
and if
you are
the devil
you shall be
my only sin


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-01 03:18 PM


My goodness, gracious ,sakes alive! If he makes you feel that great, who cares if he has horns on his head and a pitchfork in his hand!!!

Linda

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2 posted 2002-09-01 11:24 PM


sighing again...
I have one of these too. Too bad I can't keep him tied to a huge post somewhere in the house.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2002-09-01 11:37 PM


Fear not...For we I believe you are filled with desire not sin...Paul
Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-09-01 11:44 PM


I sense a little bit of a "bad girl" in this one.
Nice!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-09-01 11:51 PM


Helen,
I just knew you were perfect!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 2002-09-01 11:53 PM


Your only sin conveys so much..  
Nice writing lady slick~

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