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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-09-01 11:46 AM




In the Spring of our love
like a flower, love grew
blossoms beautiful
all nurtured by you.

In the Summer of our love
the passion, like a flame
burned hot in it's desire
the fire had your name.

In the Autumn of our love
in colorful array
our love was renewed
in a joy filled display.

In the Winter of our love
a chill filled my heart
as you told me good-bye
then turned to depart.

The seasons of love
some I'll never see again
but I'll live them forever
when I remember when.

WhiteRose


I said so softly
twas lost amid.
A whisper gone
thought now dim.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-01-2002 04:43 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2002-09-01 11:53 AM


So poignant! Yes, you have your memories and I'm sure you're making more!

P.S. You're pretty as a picture in your photo!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

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2 posted 2002-09-01 12:20 PM


Love the last stanza, it's a great conclusion.

I think, because we usually expect spring before summer that it might work to put the  spring stanza first, what do you think?

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-01 01:21 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Anne, I hope the last two seasons don't relate to your present experiences, sweet friend, may spring and summer always fill your heart with loves joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-09-01 04:44 PM


TaDa..the wonders of edit. Thank you VAS, it was an excellent idea.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-01-2002 04:45 PM).]

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