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vandana
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0 posted 2002-09-01 10:38 AM


Now time has come
Between you and me
So what are we waiting for?
When time has come
Let Us try to love again
We cry
to forget all about it
Now time has come
To proove our last chance
to love
Now time has come to
Take the chance away
Now time has come
to making love again
A brand new day
To wash away
All the pouring rain
Let the days come
To shine again
When already so much
has taken away
By the time
The time had it's own way
And now time has come
today
to bring us all
new and few showers
To our hearts
Time has it's own way
When love has to make
each new day
Now time has come
to make it's own day
Now time has It so many reasons
and shinning it's light
to the seasons that changes
within the time
Time has come
to take heart away

[This message has been edited by vandana (09-01-2002 10:45 AM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-09-01 10:42 AM


Watch out Vandana,  this one is really
starting to get the message across very
strongly....GOOD word usage....keep goin'

Barry

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2 posted 2002-09-01 10:55 AM


Yes, the time has come---and you're well on your way as a poet!  Well done, Vandana!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

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3 posted 2002-09-01 11:08 AM


vandana - very nice writing, I like it. A strong message said...

BC

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4 posted 2002-09-01 01:12 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, every poem you keep blossoming as a wonderful poet, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, may time offer loves true joy to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-09-02 09:18 PM


time waits. . . does love??

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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