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0 posted 2002-09-01 07:10 AM




Moments Revisited

It only took a moment,
for my fear to fly ~
it only took a moment,
Dad was by my side.

It only took a moment
for him to calm me down,
it only took a moment
to turn a smile from frown.

It only took a moment
plus a hug or two ~
it only took a moment
to bond to him like glue.

It only took a moment
for him to give me “winks.”
It only took a moment…
…makes you stop and think.

It only takes a moment
to make a moment best ~
it only takes a moment
for you to pass this test.

Do you take the moment?
Are you so inclined?
To make each moment special
in your own child’s mind?


2 February, 2000
©KRJ



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-09-01 07:38 AM


Kari,
fabulous write. Happy remembrance day for your father; mine was August 13th.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-09-01 07:47 AM



Ours is in June, Kethry, but you know?  I think Father's Day should be celebrated whenever we wish!  Surely one day is never enough!

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3 posted 2002-09-01 08:29 AM


You are right, one day is never enough. *HuGS*
Lynne

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4 posted 2002-09-01 08:37 AM


Beautiful Karilea....and oh so true.
~Hugs~

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5 posted 2002-09-01 01:03 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, God Bless You, I know Kethry will cherish this dedication on this special day for her as she reflects on all the wonderful memories! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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