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Open Poetry #22

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Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

0 posted 2002-08-31 07:02 PM

The love of my life
An angel unable to fly
Every life you touch
Changed my your purity

Your light shines unhindered
Unencumbered by emotional armour
Your heart so fragile
Broken by a single blow

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-09-01 10:37 AM

Aaron~
This is delicately tender~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-09-01 11:13 AM

Zall - a fragile heart, one breaks easily. Tender write...

BC

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

3 posted 2002-09-01 11:16 AM

Tender and sweet. I love it. Thanks for sharing
Peace,love,light,happiness..and a gentle touch
Tammy

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-01 11:20 AM

yes, delicate and the last two lines, poignant

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

5 posted 2002-09-02 06:32 PM

Thank you all

Aaron

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