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Pesky Critter!
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Pesky Critter! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Pesky Critter! oh, that pesky critter leaving invisible footprints across the top of my water bottle top erased from my memory by salty peanut’s thirst I thrust the bottle to my mouth and began to quench abruptly pulling it about sickening in my stomach dread attempting to annihilate my hope of survival from the tainted tracks of the flyful rival Yuck! ©August 31, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Been there, done that! Brings back not so distant memories! Double yuk!-----well done! Linda |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hehehe thanks, EA, sorry you've had a like experience, but then you understand better for the having of it Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yuk is right....mine was a cockroach once upon a time...decided to drink part of my soda for me.... Akkkkkkkkk.....patooooey!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Ugggghhhh, I don't want to get any more descriptive but one time I stepped into a gas station in Colby, Kansas and many of the drinks there in the service area had lids left open and some of the bottles had bugs floating in the beverages! Oh my gosh! I'm sorry you faced this experience, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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