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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-08-31 11:20 AM

A Life Brand New
~By Sue~

Here I am once again just sitting here
Thinking about you like I always do
Once I gave you all of the love I had inside
It seems my love was never enough for you

I cleaned the house and cooked your meals
Was always here when you came home
You never had to wonder where I was
Still you always left me here alone

You have been gone long enough for me to think
About all I have been through with you
No longer do I even want you here with me
I would rather live alone like I use to do

So if you think I want you to come back
You better just stop and think again
Because to be with you is not what I want
To watch you drink and give your sill grin

I now look forward to a happy life
A life I know I can not have with you
You have shown me this every single day
And now all I want is a life brand new

8-30-02

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-08-31 11:36 AM

SmartChick

Good and strong feelings here. Take care of yourself.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-08-31 11:38 AM

SmartChick - strong words that say it like it is. Well done my friend, best to you...

BC

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-08-31 12:38 PM

SweetSuzieQ~
You go for it big time gal~
You've done all you can do ... time to move on and start that brand new life~
Be good to yourself ... you deserve better~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-31 12:52 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you that you had to be treated like this in the first place but I am so happy to hear you say this for you are a beautiful person and deserve so much more! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, always believe in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-08-31 02:22 PM

You go girl! There's a great big beautiful world out there---go out and make it yours!
You most definitely deserve it! Very moving piece of writing. Take care!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2002-08-31 08:29 PM

Tome to move on and stike it good..my best to you

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-08-31 08:37 PM

Good for you Sue!
Now...just do it!!
I know you can!
All my best to you.
~Hugs~

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2002-08-31 08:38 PM

That's my girl
Keep that spirit going Sue
You know that when you need someone to listen
We'll all be here for you

gal, Knuffels from me

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-08-31 10:20 PM

Three hundred cheers for you, Sue...
It takes lots of courage to start out all over again on your own...
but in the end... for you, it will be well worth it.

~ lots of hugs from one of the many of us here who are all behind you...

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

10 posted 2002-08-31 10:31 PM

Sue,

Someone once told me in my hour of need that God takes care of the little birds and will take care of you.

The world is waiting for you. You owe it to yourself to be happy and to be treated well.

Let the music begin

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-08-31 10:33 PM

Sue,
From the strength of this poem I would say there is no question.
Good read and good luck.

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