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Open Poetry #22

On Love again? Seduced

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2002-08-31 11:14 AM

Seduced

He looked at me with eyes of lust
I coyly turned my gaze
What powerful messages he did send
along the sunshines rays

I smelled the scent of love pursued
a flower and a rose
The turning of an innocent phase
the petals as they closed

Love directed all my passion
the struggle and the strife
that look was all that mattered
it overtook my life

One love, one heart forever
took root in soil moist
It nutures yet another seed
from which my love rejoiced

c2002SimplyGold

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (08-31-2002 02:54 PM).]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-08-31 11:31 AM

This is simply beautiful.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-08-31 11:34 AM

SimplyGold

So beautiful is lovely love!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-08-31 11:40 AM

I think your name fits this poem very well,
for this is simply gold that you have given
us of yourself, your heart and feelings..

Thank You...

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-08-31 11:43 AM

SimplyGold - this write is Simply Gold...

BC

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

5 posted 2002-08-31 02:52 PM

Thank you Smartchick, Martie, Magnus and Bill.

Each of you has inspired me in your own way.
I read your poetry with the zest of a bear stealing honey.I can't get enough and the weekends for me just don't come soon enough.

Thank you for your feedback.

SimplyGold

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

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Michigan