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Illusions' Dreams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Illusions’ Dreams Once there came this bright illusion a simple fallacy of my heart, I fell for its deep deception but its delusions tore me apart. Wonderment came with the chimera and strong belief in its fantasy; Awake would I from hallucination, away with these delusions from me. This damn poor bit of humbuggery this hocus pocus of my heart ne’ermore a falseness to see, from this mirage I shall depart. That figment of imagination, that trick of love’s liquid streams the errors seen in the machinations are only that, a lonesome dream. ©KRJ 18 September, 1999 revised 31 August 2002 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Morning Mama K.. Been awhile since I read you...and I find myself liking this - I really like your mix of colloquial and almost-romantic language...that's an iffy combination, but I think it's successful here... and of course I love the image...being a butterfly gal myself...  This is the verse that got me: 'Wonderment came with the chimera and strong belief in its fantasy; Awake would I from hallucination, away with these delusions from me.' Yup, it got me... huggles dear  K |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
As usual, you have a way with words coupled with wonderful imagery that almost bring me to tears. Dreams are our hearts revealing Our deepest soul unbeared.. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Your writing is pure magic.. and I have missed reading you this past week. ~Big hugs sweetie~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I have wondered in that garden. Just don't pick the flowers.  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
That was a wonderful dream, wasn't it?..enjoyed the mix of the colloquial and romanticism too. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Our unspoken but shared visions of what we wish to see and the continued dash of our longings won't stop us though will it? We are therefore we Love. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea The heart sees what it wants to see...and learns wisdom in the process. This is beautiful! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, whenever I see a butterfly the sight is so breathtaking to me it almost seems like an illusion and I wonder if it's all just legerdmain or all just truly a part of everything! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - many thoughts here, great write... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Butterflies are such lovely thoughts, Karilea... They are of this world but somehow also of the world beyond... ~ hugs and butterfliesLyra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Karilea!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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