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On Missing |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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pain stretching creating tortures I could not endure if not for the weapon of your faith in me. I am raging with the madness of being happy and grieving the past and present in transition and how do I color the slow motion in between time with words that rebel against me and with a voice that not enough people listen to? pain a commanding shot demands a wound. I am missing something now that you aren't here. Can my eyes become so entangled with the dark of your lashes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Very cleverly done! Also very yin-yangy. I feel the lonliness and the pain your words convey. Linda |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
There is pain in this one and loss, you have painted it well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
God Jenn, I understand this so so much. God. Wow. Thanks for it - I needed to read this tonight for some reason...to know I'm not alone? I don't know...missing is...it's a hard thing isn't it - especially if it becomes a form of daily grind. Hugs you...you have a fine poem here, and not just because I identify with it..  K |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thank you, my friends. My writing has been less and less lately. Any replies at all are an inspiration in themselves. To be clear here. No worries. I have not lost anything. I only wait a most agonizing wait for what I have gained to be by my side again. *sigh* Love you all. *Jenn* "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know this pain. . . and I also know that not enough people read your work. . . they should. . . excellent. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Jennifer, my heart goes out to you, I understand these tears so very much and I wish for comfort to ease your heart! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I too, will agree that your work speaks to me in ways that I don't yet understand. But, this is the pain that love finds. You write it very well. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
yin yangy..that's for sure, enjoyed |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Loved it!! A great write with a clever presentation. The White Rose~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Jenn, Your thrashings against the wall leave cracks in the glass -- words inside. Mike |
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