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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-08-30 04:03 PM



To break the rod and spoil the wayward child
where but the hand is left to set the pace.
To still the heart in love when one is riled
to run the hunt in search of anger’s face.

As letters fall and words become the puzzle
upon the scrabble of the thoughts we keep.
The goblet filled with anxs which we muzzle
until the morning wakes from fitful sleep.

But when a year does pass the memory of
a time that brought the sadness flowing out
where tears then fall upon the winged dove
forgetting what the reason was to shout.

The rod of anger spared upon the child
shall bring to bear a reason both have smiled.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (08-30-2002 04:10 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-30 04:06 PM


I had an engine mechanic do this once....car's been knocking ever since?....Don't hit that baby in the face, the Lord provided a better place!...This is an exceptional write Maggie
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2 posted 2002-08-30 10:35 PM


*smile*
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(big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, I'm always heartbroken when I hear of a child being abused like that, my heart goes out to the and as mentioned in comments already, God would never allow that! (sad sigh) My prayers are with all afflicted with this pain, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-08-30 10:48 PM


Barry - the rod and the child. I remember it well, wonder if one ever forgets...

BC

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5 posted 2002-08-31 10:18 AM


Barry

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6 posted 2002-08-31 10:33 AM



May the smile be the memory's sweet.

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-08-31 10:45 AM


To all....

This topic is very controversial...

Is the rod the appropriate thing?  Can a
rod be just simply biting words that never
leave the heart?  Or,  can it be both the
physical and emotional side of what is
said or done in anger?  

Four A's...  Action plus Anger equals Abuse
Always....

So,  before you decide to use the rod,
whether physically or emotionally....ensure
that the anger is in check...

Thanx for reading and comments....HUGS all
around!!!!

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8 posted 2002-08-31 01:34 PM


a well penned sonnet.
nice job.

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9 posted 2002-08-31 02:55 PM


Well done Barry, enjoyed.
Magnus
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10 posted 2002-08-31 03:04 PM


Dor...thank you very much for reading and
noting that this is a sonnet....

Sy,  thanx as always.....

BC....with regard to your remark....NO,  one
does not forget....we just have to learn to
forgive and go on about our lives...  I
remember the rod well....Mine was a switch
that my mother used very well....too well..
Sometimes I wondered when she would stop...

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