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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-08-30 02:52 PM

There's a smooth stretch of highway
That rolls out from the past
Far away from the sadness,
where it ain't worth goin back.
And if you keep on traveling
Past road signs that say peace
You'll find the end amazing
Cause that's where you found me.

Chorus:
On that highway there's a better me for you
Drifting your way to take away your blues
Right there beneath the open sky
where the once that was, is you and I,
There's a better me for you.

(Musical break)

You had me geared for leavin
The traveling ways I lived
And a rumble in my heart
Made me settle down a bit
But my longing for the freeway
would come between our thoughts
But most don't know that feeling,
And few talk about the cost.

Chorus:
On that highway there's a better me for you
Drifting your way to take away your blues
Right there beneath the open sky
where the once that was, is you and I,
There's a better me for you.

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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2002-08-30 06:40 PM

This was so beautiful and so heartfelt Eric. Your words always leave an impression.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-08-30 06:47 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-08-30 07:09 PM

ETHome~
I REALLY like this one~
Somehow or another ... it definitely sings to me~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-08-30 07:34 PM

Eric

"And if you keep on traveling
Past road signs that say peace
You'll find the end amazing
Cause that's where you found me."

I think I'd follow a road sign that said peace...haven't seen many lately.

I think you're the tops, though.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-08-30 10:04 PM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write the most sensitive love songs as I dream of hearing more sound clips from you since the first time! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-08-30 10:42 PM

I sware, you are getting to me now...I can't wait to hear these songs with music!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-08-30 10:46 PM

ethome - I like your music. Well done!

BC

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