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SlickMA01
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0 posted 2002-08-30 02:15 PM


Have you ever woke one day feelin sumthin was missing,
Realizing that tha Serveirity of tha pain you were surpressing,
Itz been awhile but still thoughtz of you clutter my mind,
Left me blind-a filling for this emptiness I can't find.

If ya never lost a loved one ya wouldn't know tha feeling,
Lyin in your bed for dayz starin at tha ceiling,
Millionz of poeple callin you tryin to help wit tha killingz,
While my mind flippin thinkin boutz tha [edited] in tha project buildingz

I wish i could turn back tha time to take ya out of that position,
I can't believe GOD let them take you-"Why didn't you listen?"
It's so much harder loosin ur brother let alone a best friend.
But what'z harder iz tha reality that it could happen again.

Thinkin just when we were kidz and play all day,
I'd have never seen myself kneelin at tha front of your grave,
I'll sit on tha porch now where we use to chill,
Gettin angry-wantin payback-but i don't know who to kill.

Someday I swear I still feel ur presence guiding my actionz,
When I'd feel tha world breaking me down to fractionz,
U alwayz in mah heart- ur undyin luv what keep me on my feet,
I don't wanna die but I can't wait till tha day we meet.

Tha anniv. since ya left me- just came up and it passsed'
And I didn't know if I would make it
My body filled with all tha memories and feelingz
And I didn't know if I could take it

But I have ur will and strength-rememberance in ur eyez,
Inside of me you know you'll remain alwayz alive
Ayo sorry dis rhyme shed a tear cuz I feel it
Aye now since my eyez be filled wit tearz-I don't wanna see it....

RIP~I love you


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-30 02:26 PM



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the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-08-30 02:30 PM


Welcome to Passions! I love this one.

Cold hands means a warm heart

SlickMA01
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since 2002-08-30
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3 posted 2002-08-30 02:31 PM


thank you very much for the replies so far.. it means alot to me.  Much appreciated-1
SlickMA01
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4 posted 2002-08-30 04:33 PM


Are there anymore replys...????  love ya all-bye
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