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Toe Surgery

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the_loner_23
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0 posted 08-30-2002 12:34 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for the_loner_23

I had toe surgery
It was a pain
They thought they numbed my toe all the way
To find when they were cutting
They had not
It was so painful
I kicked the doctor off
He grabbed my foot
And stuck the needle in
He pulled it out
Started to cut again
I swear to GOD
I will never go
To him again

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 08-30-2002 02:23 PM       View Profile for ThunderMage   Email ThunderMage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThunderMage

Ouch! Let me deal with him.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 08-30-2002 02:45 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Believe you me, I would have made sure you were frozen to absolute zero degrees---but then again, your foot would shatter when the scalpel began to cut into your brittle flesh! ---but at least you wouldn't feel any pain!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda
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3 posted 08-30-2002 04:52 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I can't quite put my finger on it..but something about this poem gives me the chills?.....
suthern
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4 posted 08-30-2002 05:14 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

It gives me the chills, too... and a resolve to keep my lil piggies away from knives! LOL

This sounds like an awful experience, loner... hope you're better now!
quietlydying
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5 posted 11-19-2002 06:28 PM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for quietlydying

i never knew toe surgery to be so poetic.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed.  betty, i think it's time you leave now.

Artic Wind
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enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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