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Krishankins

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since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-08-30 10:47 AM

Golden love shines down
Flowing with the waves of changes
Keeping me afloat

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-08-30 11:40 AM

Beautiful.....Haiku....very peaceful and serene....

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-08-30 12:42 PM

good news
haiku
stay floatin'
Kris
brian

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-08-30 12:45 PM

Krishankins
Good one, enjoyed.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-08-30 12:47 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-30 12:48 PM

Krishankins - a nice way to stay afloat...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-08-31 12:09 PM

(smiles) Yay, I love this, all we need is love! (big hugggsssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-08-31 12:14 PM

.....oooo......aaaah........

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2002-08-31 03:06 PM

oooh...ahhh

Guess you've heard that before, though.

without the title I don't think we'd know it was a sunset and I guess haiku are not usually titled, I'm told

however, to receive the powerful message and emotion of this piece, I don't think we would have to limit it to a sunset, I really like it with or without the title

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

9 posted 2002-09-01 06:52 AM

I love sunsets... especially this one!!!

Neeraja

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2002-09-01 03:08 PM

Kris, this is so good. I've been into Haiku's so much lately and find them fascinating and fun to write. Thanks for writing this and sharing it.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-09-01 04:33 PM

enjoyed

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-09-01 07:44 PM

BRAVO! A very nice one, Kris.

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