Sparkles(had to post this after reading marge's ode to toe jam)

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Open Poetry #22

Sparkles(had to post this after reading marge's ode to toe jam)

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-08-30 10:00 AM

I can see within her the sparkles
the time yet to pass
a simple unguarded smile
provoked to laughter by monkeys

a child is a combination
of dreams and hard work
of realization and acceptance
of a love greater than your own

every moment spent
is never enough
for a father
who loves his little girl

A real man

kisses his children goodnight

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-08-30 10:49 AM

I feel this one. It hits very close to home. Nicely done!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-08-30 05:02 PM

JBowie~
This is just so beautifully done~
I've always LOVED your signature bestest~

So glad that Delaney and I could inspire such lovely thoughts~
Thank you from this lady's heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-08-30 06:05 PM

James

The most wonderful part of any man, is tenderness. This was wonderful!

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