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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-30 08:56 AM



Tomorrow

one more day
to love you
soon in my silence
I will cry
it wasn’t suppose
to end this way
hellos were not meant
for good bye



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-08-30 08:59 AM


this has a familiar ring to it...or maybe that was what I  heard from Sy's poem..

as always, nicely strung.

M

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-08-30 10:48 AM


Finally, a sad one! It still sounds SO good!
arthur
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england
3 posted 2002-08-30 11:55 AM


good bye,goodbye
why does it all end in goodbye
but it ALWAYS does
arthur

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2002-08-30 12:10 PM


So sad and so often true.
Well said
Sandra

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-08-30 12:11 PM


So sad. Yet often it must be done.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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