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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-08-30 07:22 AM


It Dials Upon My Heart

Tracing sunlight’s fleeing night
Weaving dreams of echoes flight.
Full of fancy, phantoms wile
Dialing to my mind in guile.

Arcing sparks to simmer start
Brushing strokes of abstract art.
Filled with rush and lush and dear
Unbalance my middle ear.

Leaves me prone unable to chase
The silver gold that weaves the lace
With heart and eye upon the sky.
I lay in bed and cannot fly.

I would follow the sunlight brace
To where ever this unknown place
And see the wonders of this glean
To walk among its garden green

I would unlock dementia’s more
And peek beyond our censures door.

© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
HopeS
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1 posted 2002-08-30 07:27 AM


beautiful echoes in hearts ringing tone
Within  dream palettes reflecting  
Seymour you are not alone
Hope

secretlife
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2 posted 2002-08-30 07:38 AM


Lovely? I like it..
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Toerag
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3 posted 2002-08-30 07:52 AM


This is fantastic Sigh....Women are always "dialing" on my heart....(It's usually the wrong number, or they say: "Hello, is this the party to which I'm speaking?"....then, "Who do you have your long distance carrier with?"...or, "Could I ask what interest rate you have on your home?"....)
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-08-30 08:01 AM


HopeS,
I know dear and thank you.

Secertlife,
Thank you for the lovely.

Toe,
LOL I get those calls too.

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-08-30 08:57 AM


I am a dream weaver Sy..I just  don't expose it anymore.

always a nice flow to your words.
M

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6 posted 2002-08-30 09:28 AM


Those prone moments are happening a lot more frequently here, too, Sy
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7 posted 2002-08-30 09:30 AM


Arcing sparks to simmer start
Brushing strokes of abstract art.
Filled with rush and lush and dear
Unbalance my middle ear.

Leaves me prone unable to chase
The silver gold that weaves the lace
With heart and eye upon the sky.
I lay in bed and cannot fly.
=================================


You are just calling the wrong number....
next time call 555-winkiewinkie
ask for Tinkerbell

Filled with rush and lush and dear
Unbalance my middle ear.


youre so coool

Read your own poetry aloud...you'll hear the balance...you give that to us each day.

    


Zall
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8 posted 2002-08-30 09:30 AM


Again great piece
Martie
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9 posted 2002-08-30 09:45 AM


Sy

The silver gold that weaves the lace
is found within a profound place
its colored with an artist's eye
whose poetry like name is Sy


JamesBowie
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10 posted 2002-08-30 09:55 AM


for some odd reason the use of brushes and arc made me think of electrical generators. weird huh, but as always I have to stop and read your words as they are always worth the time. J
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11 posted 2002-08-30 10:03 AM


Another lovely morning offering from a dear gentle man. thanks Seymour!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

SmartChick
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12 posted 2002-08-30 10:45 AM


This is simply beautiful, Sy.
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13 posted 2002-08-30 10:50 AM




As the mist leaves from the dawn
and the dew dries upon the lawn
see soft shine upon thy face
feel the warmth of Sun's embrace...

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2002-08-30 10:53 AM


Maureen,
I noticed, thank you.

Balladeer,
Didn't I tell you it's catching.

JM,
555-winkiewinkie Now it's out of the bag. Everyone can call. WWRS

Zall,
Thank you.

Martie,


James,
Thank you sir.

Nightshade,
You are welcome Chris.

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-08-30 10:55 AM


Sunshine,
I feel it, I feel it,

Marsha
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16 posted 2002-08-30 02:06 PM


Seymour darling heart this is brilliant writing and such a beautiful flow as always, your daily touch upon this page always rings my bell.

Sunlight seeks to illume your eyes
Glisten in their hopeful sighs
But with the night I shall appear
Called to soothe away your fear
I’m summoned by your phantom call
Dialled to wander in soul’s hall
Run through the vales of poetry
In the mind of what could be
Let go of thoughts and feel the zing
Cede to the charms that I bring
Over the keys that lead to me
Run your fingers so lightly
And link your soul to mine in this
Receive my electric kiss

I really love this you excel at writing the delights in the morning. i love it utterly utterly utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2002-08-30 03:53 PM


Marsha,
Once again I enjoyed your poem and responce to my dialing. You are a wonder of recite.
Be well and I thank you.

Mistletoe Angel
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18 posted 2002-08-31 12:06 PM


"I would follow the sunlight brace
To where ever this unknown place
And see the wonders of this glean
To walk among its garden green

I would unlock dementia’s more
And peek beyond our censures door."




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Seymour, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, every morning may you rise before that sun and find your spirit slowly soaring from your wisdows walk all upon the graceful wind! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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19 posted 2002-08-31 06:35 AM


I looked beyond the censure's door
and behind dementia's moor
I found that always, when I roam
I think of you; come back to home.
Stunning write, you're prone to do that.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2002-08-31 07:59 AM


Noah,
I always enjoy your repies.

Keth,
Now that's what I call a lovely comment.

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