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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-08-30 07:10 AM



Beside You I knelt

I feel your thoughts
When I’m alone
Hearing your words
In seductive tone

I enrich my senses
Taste and touch
Smell your cologne
Loving so much

I imagine hazel eyes
Gazing my blue
Then sliding my body
Up close to you

I dress in my gown
Of pink and red
Arms wrap around
Upon your bed

I am so enthralled
Beside you knelt
Passion embracing
Erotically felt

Hope©2002

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-08-30 07:19 AM


HopeS,
A very enticing write, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-08-30 11:27 AM


I agree with Seymour, very nice.
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3 posted 2002-08-30 12:17 PM


Lovely and sensual. Enjoyed. Chris

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Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-08-30 12:50 PM


HopeS - m'mmmmm, a most sensual read this morning...

BC

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