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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-30 01:02 AM



Bone Deep

I am
his delta dawn
he taught me
a love song
plays tender music
for me all night long
loving is
his special art
touches me in
the greenest part
folds and wraps me
high in his heart
quiver with
whispers he tells
I am under
his sweetest spell
it’s not my skin
it’s my bones he has
come to dwell


[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (08-30-2002 01:07 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-08-30 01:07 AM


Well, I have to admit it, the title intrigued me!
Sounds like your nights are nicely taken care of!
You are one lucky woman!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

arthur
Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
2 posted 2002-08-30 12:04 PM


now that my dear is very very good
hope that doesnt sound condescending
but it just is
very good
if it is an expression of experiance you are very lucky
but alas
most poetry is an expression of longing
arthur

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