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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2002-08-30 12:55 PM




you inspired this write..

On the couch is boredom land
cannot visualize it as one stands
to be on foot is to have intent
and to sit is to become complacent
a little careless, absent, negligent
like when you let things slide
funny at high tide..you had riden the crests
and there was a smile from ear to ear
now why let boredom moor at mind's pier...

So much to learn... rework approaches
mentor some child...establish a fraternal bond
partake in a choir....sing a melody or two
think of a tune.. concentrate away from your blues..
that neglected sport..that forlorn hobby left in a drawer
can see the daylight, quench skill, feed an aura.

Physical activity gets motor neurons to fire
before you turn off the light to retire
think of all the activities you can find
as you allow other neural processes to unwind.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-30-2002 01:08 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-08-30 01:02 AM


Wise words from a wise man.

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

ecrivan
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my own state
2 posted 2002-08-30 01:12 AM


Thanks for the compliment..guess some wisdom does show through


Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2002-08-30 02:19 AM


"Physical activity gets motor neurons to fire
before you turn off the light to retire
think of all the activities you can find
as you allow other neural processes to unwind."
That's what's happening to my neurons right this minute...they are getting recharged by the constant visual interaction of words on blue pages.
Well said, writer of wisdom.


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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4 posted 2002-08-30 12:10 PM


Very wise you are and I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ecrivan
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my own state
5 posted 2002-08-30 09:44 PM


and I follow my own medicine too..hehe


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