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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

0 posted 2002-08-29 09:40 PM

Hello-o!  Anybody home?!?
It's time to get the show on the road!
Knock!  Knock!  Wake up you numbskull!
...Is anybody in there?!?
I've been cruising along on automatic pilot
and care not where I've been or where I'm going.
...H-E-L-P!!!...I'm falling!*!
Who clipped my celestial wings?!?
I'm now in a downward spiral
--grounding experience---if I survive the fall!*!
This dose of reality can't be what the doctor
  ordered!
...What's that you say?
Stand up straight!?
Get my act together!?
...Thanks--but no thanks.
I prefer my head above the clouds
---the sun shines more brightly up there.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-29 09:43 PM

...Thanks--but no thanks.
I prefer my head above the clouds
---the sun shines more brightly up there.

I've never heard it said better. Great poem Linda

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-29 11:09 PM

(smiles) Yay, that's the spirit, always feel how you wish to feel and follow your heart and you will always lift and glitter in the sunshine with joy! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you always spread your poetic wings with such grace, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-08-29 11:11 PM

You got a lot of spirit in this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-08-30 12:08 PM

Thanks for the feedback! When I wrote this a few years ago, the words came out exactly as you see them. I didn't edit a thing. Just proves that when you write with passion, the words just come. Almost like automatic writing!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-08-30 11:51 PM

Dear Linda, after reading this poem once more, I find that I rather like the 'in your face' attitude. You should claim your power more often. So fix those celestial wings of yours and fly up above the clouds where the sun shines more brightly.

Love, Light & Looney Toons
Linda

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