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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-08-29 09:30 PM


What has become of Doctor Love?
He's not dispensing his advice
He hasn't even paid his nurse
Don't tell me I must ask him twice.

We need more words from the good Doc
He uses love as medicine
just want to tell him he is missed
and wonder where it is he's been.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-29 09:35 PM


Doctor Love is taking
Every potion on the shelf
Trying to find the remedy
So he can cure himself!


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2 posted 2002-08-29 10:08 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, I miss him so much too, I could sure use some of his advice now missing Joanna a lot while she's busy! (sigh) I guess in the meantime you'll have to cover for him! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-08-29 10:23 PM


Its a cute poem, Sandra...but who is Doctor Love?
Does he look anything like this guy?

     ~ loving chipmunk hugs


Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks


[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (08-29-2002 10:24 PM).]

Inuwindow
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4 posted 2002-08-29 10:47 PM


There is a Doctor Love at this poetry place too. I have encountered, humour, adorable, and simple poetry here so far. Now I see your charming poem looking for Doctor Love. I hope you find him, wherever he may be. If I happen upon him, I'll let him know you're awaiting his cure. Thanks for sharing your poem tonight.
the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-08-29 10:51 PM


Interesting

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-08-30 05:11 AM


Dr Love, within this place
has fallen flat upon his face
I did not see him when he went
and you must sing a sad lament
as his nurse, I'm sure you'd know
all the places he could go
Is it that you've lost love's keys
Or simply that he owes you fees
whate'er the reason you should know
he been upgraded and had to go.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Toerag
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7 posted 2002-08-30 08:07 AM


Take two Toerags, one in the late evening and one in the morning...if that doesn't work, I'll have to give you a complete exam!
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-08-30 09:10 AM


Yes bring him back Sandra...he turns a frown
upside down *s
hugs
M

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9 posted 2002-08-30 09:56 AM


Oh, Yes Sandra!! Call him back!! Doctor, Doctor give me some news, I've got a bad case of missing muse." Really. Please find him Sandra. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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10 posted 2002-08-30 11:30 AM


Sandra~


This is so cute...hopefully the Good DR will apprear Soon......


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

arthur
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11 posted 2002-08-30 11:52 AM


we all search for love
yet so find it
or recognise it when they do
arthur

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2002-08-30 12:44 PM


Sandra - he's around somewhere, I know that he is. Perhaps he'll be back soon...

BC

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13 posted 2002-08-30 12:50 PM


catalinamoon
If I find him I'll let you know. Cute write.

Rick
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14 posted 2002-08-31 08:30 AM


Dear Sandra, he is not far away, at times we must go of the medicine to see how we then feel and get on.
Enjoyed the read.


Doctor love, he washed away with tears
And all the hurts you felt with years
He left, for your heart broke to cry
As all its passion bid goodbye

But doctor love resides not far
He knows you seek the one of star
And he will call again real soon
When smile again becalms the moon

So watch for him, for he will come
When all the aches from you do run
He’ll give you something that will be
The long lost love that sets you free

Take care and good luck finding doctor love.

Sincerely
Rick

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15 posted 2002-09-03 12:00 PM


Like 'Deer said, my dear
I've been out curing myself
you've hurt my feelings
thought you'd been paid in advance
check is in the mail

PS
If any of you
took a toerag, God forbid
we'll treat for trench mouth

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Toerag
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16 posted 2002-09-03 12:26 PM


Interloper....

When people say unkind things,
or slander me even worse,
I always salvage my feelings,
by just considering the source.

"I appreciate your slander" I say,
"honestly, I really do,"
Considering how the unkind words,
only came from you.

But to put it in perspective,
what I really meant,
Is an insult from a source of ignorance,
is really just a compliment.

[This message has been edited by Toerag (09-03-2002 12:35 PM).]

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17 posted 2002-09-03 01:45 PM


If you find him, send him my way, I’ll be down on the beach where the sea mist hides the tears.  Yes he’s been missed here too.
Madame Chipmunk
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18 posted 2002-09-03 02:25 PM



Here he is
he'll cure your ills
with broken hearts
ground into pills  

now... lets keep him here
don't let him go
he'll listen to
our tales of woe

~ hugs full of heart:

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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Deep in the heart
19 posted 2002-09-03 03:00 PM


now, now, Toe my man
I have always been your fan
Rest easy boy-san

Toerag
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20 posted 2002-09-03 03:09 PM


But interloper...that's probably the best poem I've ever written?...LOL
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21 posted 2002-09-03 03:20 PM


Toe,

That was the ... best ... you've ... ever ... written?  

Oh, my!

And to think I wrote a Senryu that broke all the rules and rhymed.

We should both be shot

WhileIWasGone
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22 posted 2002-09-03 03:37 PM


Very nice....I enjoyed this very much.

DeaDiAmore

Toerag
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23 posted 2002-09-03 03:48 PM


Interloper...when ya write as badly as I do man...you get proud of those that almost rhyme much less really rhyme...
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24 posted 2002-09-04 12:47 PM


Sorry, Toe, I should have been more considerate of your plight

Oh, Sandra ... nurse of mine ... tell me what you want for pay and I will see you get it post haste.  Anything your heart desires ... within reason or human capability, that is

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

catalinamoon
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25 posted 2002-09-04 02:52 PM


Dear Doctor Love, I need a cure
To loves lack I am not innured
I've tried to be strong and alone
still yearning for love long ago.

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