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Open Poetry #22
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Encarta
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since 2002-02-14
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My homeland is not of the world

0 posted 2002-08-29 05:38 PM


Now, I didn't write this for, or to anyone.  It just poped in my head, I started working with it, and here it is...

Marry me,

My heart burns for you, my love
My soul soars like a dove
Carrying the ring of my life
To give to you to be my wife

And if you say yes to this, my dear
We'll join as one, and end all fear
For paradise lies within your eyes
As hi lies within goodby

For the goodbye of today is the hi of tomarrow
And the Joy of today was yesterday's sorrow
And by your side I wish to be
Me with you, and you with me.

"They do not love that do not show their love.”-Shakespeare

© Copyright 2002 James M. Hohne - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2002-08-29 05:49 PM


Balladeer called and said "YES!"...he'll marry you!!!!.....nice poem...
Encarta
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world
2 posted 2002-08-29 06:05 PM


Hmm...It might not have been writen for anyone, but I wouldn't give it to a guy...I'm not that kind of guy
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-08-29 11:06 PM


I think you should read your poem again. It speaks volumes to me about what is in your heart. If the words just popped out of your head, they most likely came from your subconscious which is your higher self. I'd trust it over my rational mind which just hasn't gotten the message yet! Just a thought! Enjoyed the read.


Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-08-29 11:06 PM


Very nice

Cold hands means a warm heart

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