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I was me and you were there
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I was me and you were there |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I guess I guessed wrong again always believing that love would win But sometimes one must lose to learn Love pushed me to the edge and there I avoided the fall until I could no more and from your own hands I fell only to wake up wondering what the hell I was thinking Then I was back in your arms again Many days passed and I felt nothing until I saw the proximity of your eyes then it all started again I was me and you were there And I offered my all to you trying to guess what would be a better move Avoiding the previous steps but making the same mistake taking you back guessing wrong again |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sad  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
*sigh* Love is never wrong, but it IS sometimes painful. What else can I say? In a field of growing flowers there are always weeds In an overflowing orchard there are always bees So why should it be different in the place you call your home? When no matter what you do the rose always has thorns... Been there..done that..feel for you. ***Big hugs*** Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
incredibly power-filled of the emotion expressed heart-wrenching, truly! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree, this is heart-wrenching. Great write. |
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