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bakedangel
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0 posted 2002-08-29 12:43 PM



Why do I blame myself for something I could never change?
Why do I continue to torture myself over what you have decided?
Why cant I get you off my mind when I tell myself repeatedly to forget about you?
Why cant I forget your smell?
Why cant I forget the times you held me in your arms?
Why cant I look at my hands and not think of all the times you have held them?
Why cant I stop thinking of all the memory's and laughs we have had?
Why cant I wake up tomorrow and be like Im over him and mean it?
Why does this pain keep getting stronger with every breath I take?
Why do I feel so empty inside?
Why does my soul hurt?
Why cant you think of me half as much as I think of you?
Why don't you feel the hollow heart such as I have?
Why do act like I was never even in your life?
Why cant I say the right things to change your mind?
Why cant you come back and heal all of this pain.......Why? Because you are with her.....
Tell me what she has that I don't?
Tell me you didn't mean to hold me in your arms so tight
Tell me all your kisses were given with your eyes open
Tell me you didn't mean to say I love you
Tell me you didn't mean to say I looked gorgeous every day
Tell me you lied about all the feelings you said you had felt
Tell me that all the laughs and good times we have had were all fake
Tell me I meant nothing to you....so I can move on...

~*~Regina~*~

© Copyright 2002 Regina M. - All Rights Reserved
Star T
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1 posted 2002-08-29 01:26 PM


that was a beautiful piece.i know exactly how u feel...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-29-2002 01:29 PM).]

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-08-29 01:29 PM



The eternal questions.  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

bslicker
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3 posted 2002-08-29 01:30 PM


I thought this was very good also.
Except i need to change the her to him
and the she to he.


Bernie

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Bernie Slicker

walker
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4 posted 2002-08-29 02:05 PM


Welcome. I like the poem. Love can be so hurtful, but it hurts so good
Tammy Blessing
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5 posted 2002-08-29 02:38 PM


Why? The eternal question of love and life. Nice debut. Sorry for your pain, but remember.. what does not kill us, makes us stronger. You have the strength, you will go on..hopefully to write more cool poetry around here in a wonderful circle of friends. Hello and Welcome.
Peace,love,light and happiness
Tammy

Toerag
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Ala bam a
6 posted 2002-08-29 03:09 PM


And the answer is:....You need to take a deep breath and forget the idiot existed.......why?....see answers below:


He's an idiot
See above
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Ya need to find a Toerag!!!!...Good write

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-08-29 08:08 PM


BakedAngel~
Welcome to Passions~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-08-29 11:13 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Regina, this is such a powerfully heartwrenching debut, sweet friend, I know how love can hurt like this but just have the courage to go on for He always has a plan and true love will find your way, this is very sensitive and touching, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Regina, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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9 posted 2002-08-29 11:14 PM


This is awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

SimplyGold
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10 posted 2002-08-31 10:43 AM


Welcome to Piptalk. You've written what we have all asked at one time or another. It is pretty powerful when we see it on paper. Paul McCartney answered it best:
"Let it be
    Let it be,
  whipered words of wisdom,
    Let it be"

Looking forward to more of your writing.

SimplyGold

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (08-31-2002 10:34 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-08-31 12:53 PM


Welcome to these passionate pages. Why is the eternal Q, and why not is sometimes an acceptable answer, though probably not in this case.
Keep writing it out. I hope you will enjoy the comraderie at Pips.

secretlife
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12 posted 2002-09-02 12:06 PM


You know dear its the first time for me to feel my body tremble when I read your peom..I feel it the word from your heart,,,I really also feel you. Dont feel sad dear friend every thing will be allright I know how the love is so hard but wait and see what the days are hiding for you..
Very great peom.... Keep writting I will be waiting to read more... Welcome dear...


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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