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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-08-29 08:26 AM

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Heart’s Dusty Brocades

Words they used to flow
Now lay thick with dust
There the once believed
Covers the whom to trust

Place in the heart archive
Lays the dusty brocades
All those believable notes
Where your past parades

Woven into heart’s fabric
Stitched into every groove
Words I gathered within
Memories I can’t remove

The forever I believed in
Neath my heart coverlet
Herein the details remain
Of a past I cannot forget

Daily into the dusty cache
Collected words weaved
Heart left tied to memory
For you I once believed

Hope ©2002
By Hope

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

1 posted 2002-08-29 09:29 AM

Dear Hope ... this is lovey, it just takes my breath away in it's beauty.

And yes...trust is the key.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-08-29 10:03 AM

This is truly a poetic gem. I am new to PIP so I haven't had the opportunity to read your work prior to now, but I can assure you that after reading this poem I'll be checking out your postings! Absolutely wonderful writing!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-08-29 10:08 AM

Words they used to flow
Now lay thick with dust

This is beautiful, Hope...
On reading the first 2 lines, I thought you were writing about writers block, but the heartbreak you describe is so searing and painful...

~ hugs from your chipmunk friend

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2002-08-29 10:08 AM

Thank you Janette , yes I have to agree
"trust is certainly a must
Hope

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-08-29 04:00 PM

Hope~
Your poetry is always so lovely~

'Woven into heart’s fabric
Stitched into every groove
Words I gathered within
Memories I can’t remove'

Oh, I know this brocade well~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-08-29 07:49 PM

this is perfect from the title to the ending....I know exactly how this feels...

nicely done Hope

M

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