navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » Dark Dreaming
Open Poetry #22
Post A Reply Post New Topic Dark Dreaming Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Sandpiper
Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

0 posted 2002-08-29 07:24 AM


Dark Dreaming

rusted words, stained pages,
dust of the sin,
all that remains
of then

on this night without breath
a devil's eyes betray his smiles,
as he follows me
into the dark dreaming

wake me
at midnight's chiming
I want to breathe
the perfect rhyming
of two

it is that breath
of purest love,
I've
never
known

© Copyright 2002 K. Addison Elliott - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-08-29 08:57 AM


Sad and frail, our search for the grail.
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-08-29 09:05 AM


Sandpiper
If you touch the water of reflection it circles to eternity, enjoyed.

Janette
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now
3 posted 2002-08-29 09:25 AM


"wake me"

Oh yes, indeed....one would NOT wish to miss...a thing!

Loved this piece of work!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » Dark Dreaming

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary