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Their Silent Tears Fill... (Tanka)
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Their Silent Tears Fill... (Tanka) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Their silent tears fill An azure pool of sadness. Drink deep, remember. Forget not the days of night, Lest they shall be repeated. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthAngel~ A poignantly written piece for sure~ Just lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Linda, this is poignant, but beautiful in its presentation. Well done Tanka. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
very sound advice..nice work Cher Poetry is: |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Short but Ohh so sweet..just the way I like 'em. Great write. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
neat statement..keep them coming  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Forget not the days of night I love this, Linda...  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Linda, this is sooooo heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all the children and less fortunate who weep and wish for God to grace them all with hope and rise! (sigh) This is very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sad Sad Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for your comments. I love writing haikus and tankas. Powerful visuals and emotions can be portrayed with so few words. LLL L |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A sadly but beautiful piece enjoyed  |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Short pieces have far more impact for me. They come and they go, but the message always remains. Nice work EA Zall, |
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