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A Nuance Of Two
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A Nuance Of Two |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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A Nuance Of Two Stroke your nuance of yes over my soul Lead me into dreams when touch is whole Take the fire that I spread over and in And breathe your heat onto my soft skin Brush my face with your words of delight Then dance in mind until the eve of night Cloak my form in your poetic thought And show me the signs of what I have sought Join me in poetic dance in my mind Let’s roam in the glades of dragon’s find Shade my soul with sighs of wordy starlight Paint my smile in hues of fire’s night Breathe the words of poetic voice to me While strolling through your soul dreamily Take me there to that place once more my friend Then leave me there until time does end I’ll dance the steps of wonder in your glade Wrap myself in wisps of dreamer’s shade Trip over the threshold of your mind’s dare Wander in places neither here nor there If you’ll whisper words of your poet’s voice Offer me reasons and lots of choice If you will gift me with the breath of this The fire’s heat of your poet’s kiss Come taste a nuance of my poet’s sin These thoughts of such stoke my soul within Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (08-28-2002 06:21 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dream of me and you will be whole... Hear my whispers and let them fall upon the ears of a mind enthralled. Feel the flickering fires tickling your dreams, your imaginatiion...your mind.. as the passions of life melt into the fire glowing ever bright... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyMyMarshaLove~ So utterly delightful is this pen-of-heart~ You dance the words all over the page then bring them utterly, utterly close to climatically leaping over the edge in excited nuance~ Oh my dear .... this .... this is H E A V E N L Y~ 'Take me there to that place once more my friend Then leave me there until time does end' Exquisite~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-28-2002 06:34 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your words dial my heart in wile Full of fancy, phantoms and guile.  |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
when two wild children dance in glade's fading light the neighbors of glens stop their wind sway in tearful jealousy Maaasha, the queen of Mush the undisputed Princess of Poetic Love i found myself enthralled by the lines: Let’s roam in the glades of dragon’s find Shade my soul with sighs of wordy starlight Paint my smile in hues of fire’s night each day is a new dawn when your words appear jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Marsha, this is wonderful, I love it, your words always are filled with such passion and delight, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you!] Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marsha, Marsha, Marsha! Fortunate is the man who is the recipient a love like yours! This poem is simply superb. Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You are dancing the thoughts of wonder all over my screen, Marsha... A lovely poem.  ~ hugs from a dancing chipmunkLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Mushy, If that's sin, I gladly partake. Mike |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like the tender heat in this beauty very much, Marsha. *S* The first two verses make me think someone is a very lucky man... the closing makes me think you both are... for steps of wonder are to be cherished. *S* Beautiful work! |
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