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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-28 08:33 AM


I need~

the warmth of sun
the cool of moon
the sigh of wind

loves soft touch
upon my skin

awaken me
embrace my heart.


Let me bathe
in morning dew

let the kiss
of butterfly

touch light
upon my face

let the orchid
cover me

in royal
of purple

let the forest
shade with gray.

Let nature love~

surround my heart.


I need~

the warmth of sun
the cool of moon
the sigh of wind

loves soft touch
upon my skin.

WhiteRose

I said so softly
twas lost amid.
A whisper gone
thought now dim.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2002-08-28 09:59 AM


A very soft and soothing read. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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2 posted 2002-08-28 10:59 AM


Yes, soft and soothing and don't we all need those things, even if we don't think so.

I like the progressive movement of this with an ever so slight ebb now and then.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-10-09 11:36 AM



A simple request,
sometimes,
so hard to meet...

Nice Write!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-10-09 11:45 AM


WhiteRose
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2002-10-09 11:47 AM


Rose of White

~

MAY YOU HAVE

"the warmth of sun
the cool of moon
the sigh of wind

loves soft touch
upon (your) skin"

~

EA

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2002-10-09 11:49 AM


LOVELY!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
7 posted 2002-10-09 12:27 PM


I believe it found its place ...
     with just the right touch.

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
8 posted 2002-10-09 12:48 PM


Thank you all very much. I thought this one would have slipped into oblivion by now. It was nice to come here and see it again.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
9 posted 2002-10-09 12:48 PM


This is absolutely stunning; I love it's soft touch and we all need to experience the joy of these things.

Great job of writing.

Hugs, Marti


Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

[This message has been edited by NewEnglandlazurlu (10-09-2002 12:50 PM).]

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-10-10 02:42 AM


Me too...James
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