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Would You Care to Waltz
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Would You Care to Waltz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Would You Care to Waltz I see this butterfly of you Dressed in multi colored hew And I am hormonized in stare By the wonder of your fair The twitter of your wings in stir Stirs my eyes to see aver And subtle music plays my ear Every moment you are near. I wait for you to stop and light To pause a moment in your flight So I may offer you my heart Before you lift too soon depart. I offer you a ring of chance A ring of time for us to dance Upon the wind that blows the sea Upon the winds eternity It is my dear a dance of rhyme A waltz upon the trance of time |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Sy ... you're making me sigh ... Wonderfully rhythmic as always, and such a melodic piece. I do believe it danced through my mind as beautifully as it's subject!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart and holder of the dawn’s caress. Whenever I read you I’m swept away by the touch within the words, I certainly can see the beauty and feel the wonder flowing through my mind. Truly exquisite writing, every single time you write, I hear the words ripple though my soul, how well you know how to brush my eyes with wonder and your words know exactly how to cloak the day in delight. And how beautifully you display nature’s grace excellent writing stunningly well written the way it flows from beginning to end in such perfect harmony. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly. The write of sigh within the thought The flow of touch that love had bought Within the line that’s written here There is no night that I do fear The thought it glows within hope’s light Illumes the mind and clears the sight Releases truth to flutter free Which once released, flies to me And I am cleansed by such a gift The words you write inspire and lift The flow of love that touches me Writes my sigh and sets me free This touch of truth your written sigh The touch of such I feel it’s nigh This is simply gorgeous writing well done, I love it utterly utterly love it As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, may you always waltz to eternity with joy and bliss! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How great! I see you now understand the shopping list!... Go get her! Simply wonderful. ThisDiamond |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Not only will I Waltz with you ... but we could do a Cha-cha too How about a Fox Trot or a Jitterbug Jive I'll bet a Samba would make Randy come alive How about a Rhumba or a Lindy Hop We will bop till we drop ... no need to stop Would you like to Tango with me ... How bout a Hula dance to set us free Randy could Belly Dance or teach us a Disco move Hes a dancing fool when he gets in his groove How about a Polka ... or a Minuet and Ive not been to the Ballet yet. Can you teach me Merengue or a Charleston with a dip With you the "light fantastic" ... I wish to trip I would love to shuffle a Two Step with you I hope you don't mind if I really do step on a toe or two. For you see this butterfly might fly to your beat ... but I'll warn you and Randy ... the moth has two left feet.  *L**winkiewinkie*  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh get out of the way, my feet are dancing! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I see this butterfly of you Dressed in multi colored hew And I am hormonized in stare By the wonder of your fair Oh, my goodnes Seymour, this is simply beautiful. I am waltzing it right into my library!! hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Is that an apple sigh or an apple pie? What ever I'll have some. Marsha, My dear utterly, It is such a delight to read your replies and poetry. You really liven up my day and I thank you. Noah, Thank you my friend. This Diamond, Thank you and I did get her. JM, Your poetry was a delight. Forget about the two left feet Jump on Randy and have a seat. And we'll fly until we overheat. WWRS Sunshine, Just get on the conga line. LOL Nightshade, Thank you my dear. |
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LRbaba Junior Member
since 2002-05-07
Posts 30Dallas, Texas, |
enjoyed this Sy and happy anniv. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LRbaba Thank you and I enjoy your writing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Put on your dancing shoes Stinkylove    Artwork by : JACK VETTRIANO www.allwalls.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Are you the one in the red dress? Thank you I enjoyed the dance. Stinky |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sy, Beautiful. Mike |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Thanks for the beautiful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When Mr. Webster Dictionary is at a loss for words, Mr. Tabin comes up with his own vocabulary to aptly fit the the situation! ..."hormonized" stare. I love it! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my stars! This was absolutely adorable, and of course the waltz of the moth was not too bad either! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel There isn't exactly a word like that, but there should be. LOL Thank you. Sharon, Thank you my dear, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - show her this, I'm sure she will dance the night away... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, LOL we are still dancing. Thank you |
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