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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-28 12:56 PM



Tomorrow he'll come
the shadow comes too

We'll pretend of course
we always do

He'll hold me close
I'll sigh a lot.

I'll think I'm special
he'll remind I'm not.

At first some love
will share the space.

One day, maybe two
I'll see that face.

Disappointment obvious
when comes day three.

By the fourth day
the hatred I'll see.

Then another month
I'll wait again.

My God when does
the punishment end.

WhiteRose

I said so softly
twas lost amid.
A whisper gone
thought now dim.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-08-28 01:19 AM


Maybe it ends when you find a different lover, one who reminds you how special you are, not how special you aren't?
Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-08-28 01:20 AM


This is a sad piece, WR. I hope warm smiles and better days find you soon.
Nice Job!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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3 posted 2002-08-28 09:48 PM


Excellent write...sad though...and I do
hope that it ain't about you....cause maybe
it is time to go looking for something that
is cooking....not cold in the freezer...

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-08-28 09:49 PM


Nice job

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-28 09:53 PM


A really nice write, Anne... but y'know... its a big world out there, and as my mother always used to say... theres a lot of fish in the sea...
Maybe you ought to go fishing!!!
~ hugs from a fishy chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-08-28 11:09 PM


What can I say. All of your comments and concern is appreciated. This place is now a refuge and I can't tell you how much you all mean to me. I will only say this. Tis not so easy after 14 years. And the angel, my sweet Ashley, well for her I'd do anything. Enough said. Again, thank you all.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-29-2002 09:42 AM).]

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7 posted 2002-08-28 11:51 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Anne, I'm so sorry you feel this way but hope now everything is alright and you have found your lcky catch! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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