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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-08-27 10:52 PM



Surround of summer grasses
The sound of evening passes
Ingested and absorbed
To light in love assured

Some other mystic comings
The sound of muted hummings
Internalized and found
To shine in soft surround

Since once upon a time
The sound your heart to mine
In harmony and tone
Together now alone

Surround of beings gentle
The sound of sentimental
In giggle now to grin
To smile your love within

Copyright Kkh 8/27/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-27 10:52 PM


This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-08-28 12:59 PM


brief yet captivating..I would have said though 'sound so sentimental'..just a thought


Krishankins
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3 posted 2002-08-28 01:30 AM


Simply marvelous!!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

vlraynes
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4 posted 2002-08-28 02:58 AM



ThisDiamond-
Truly beautiful, my friend.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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5 posted 2002-08-28 08:15 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, may your smile always sound with joy and bring great bliss to your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-08-28 09:24 AM



This is a most lovely sound...
I am so glad I heard it!

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-08-28 05:40 PM


If this is how a smile sounds,  give me at
least two....cause it brings one to the
face already....

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-08-28 07:06 PM


...surround, sound, soft, summer, sentimental, smile...---soooo sweeet! I love the "s" words! Enjoyed the poem!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-08-28 09:03 PM


ThisDiamond - and I would bet that it is a most beautiful smile...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-08-29 12:18 PM


I love the sound of this smile, Kathy...
Its very euphonious...
~ an earful of smiling hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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11 posted 2002-08-29 12:20 PM



Auguste
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12 posted 2002-08-29 09:41 PM


Such a nice sound
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