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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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My life used to be a mess I would do one stupid thing after another My teen age years past by like a flash of lightning It was nothing but blurry And meaningless And that is what my teen age years will always be Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I know the feeling. Those years sucked for me too. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ahhh yes, the proving ground. Experience states that the teenage years are given as a mirror to reflect real life... Well done my friend. ThisDiamond |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
It is only blurry because you don't feel like you were involved in it....Take some time to think of the "good times" (there HAS to be at least some to them) and the "blurry" becomes Your OWN "reality" and it has shaped you into the beautiful person (and Poet) that you are. No real critique here...just loveing you for who and what you became and WHERE...... look not to the future...but to the past.. to find who and what you are and will become...... Light,Love,and Happiness.... Tammy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whatever those years may or may not have been, one thing is evident to me, they played a role in your becoming the insightful woman you are today. Your pen is the extension of your beautiful soul. Keep on writing and continuing to grow! |
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