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Tammy Blessing
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0 posted 2002-08-27 10:43 PM



Silent Screaming

Know my heart is silent screaming
Know my past is heartfelt leaning
Know my body aches for loss
Know I've paid such a cost

Know I"ve felt pain and glory
Know mine is but ONE story
Know my pain is not your own
Know my heart is all alone

Know my past is future creeping
Know my dreams are future sleeping
Know my heart is silent screaming
As past is present, still unseeing


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-27 10:44 PM


This is awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-08-27 10:46 PM


Very well done, Tammy... I read it aloud and it almost sounded like a chant...
~ hugs from the chanting chipmunk

Lyra

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3 posted 2002-08-27 10:49 PM


Vibrant write my friend. All eases in the dawn of loving ourselves. ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-08-29 09:21 AM


Tammy~
I felt the emotion in this piece~

'Know my dreams are future sleeping'

And when the dreams awaken ... they'll make a mighty sound~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-08-29 09:56 AM


Yes a chant of pain and need to bbe understood..very nice write
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6 posted 2002-08-29 10:00 AM


It is probably better that we don't know the future, we would probably scream louder then.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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7 posted 2002-08-29 01:34 PM


I "Know" one thing for sure, I love this poem! As a lover of music (and writer of it myself), I especially enjoyed the rhythmic cadence.

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

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8 posted 2002-08-29 02:16 PM


I love how you bring the connection between past, present and future together.We are what we've been. I love this one.


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9 posted 2002-08-29 02:27 PM


Really good write!!! Interesting use of words fersure
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10 posted 2002-08-29 02:35 PM


There is so much emotion in this- very well written.

"What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been."

Tammy Blessing
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11 posted 2002-08-29 03:29 PM


Thanks to all.
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12 posted 2002-08-29 11:31 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Tammy, I understand just how you feel, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you as I too have these silent screas for my sweet Joanna, and I wish for soon loud laughter of joy to escape your lips! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tammy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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