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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-08-27 07:19 PM




I stand right here before you
The man who I adore
You've filled my heart with love
I've never felt like this before

You love me so completely
How I savour every day
These times I'll always cherish
As you take my breath away

How I thrive when in your radius
My spirit soaring high above
I bloom just like a flower
In the garden of your love

This day is now a memory
And tomorrow is far from view
So I'll escape inside my dreams
And fill my mind with thoughts of you

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-27 07:22 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous poems of love always touch my heart because I feel the same way for Joanna and dream of being in her radius and holding her hand happily! (kiss on cheek) May love always be beside you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-08-27 07:23 PM


Wonderful imagery
Stunning in thought.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-08-27 07:29 PM


Some beautiful images here, Sue...
You sure sound happy...
~ hugs and smiles

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Trillium
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4 posted 2002-08-27 11:22 PM


Sue:  Lovely and romantic!  

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-08-28 12:41 PM


"This day is now a memory
And tomorrow is far from view
So I'll escape inside my dreams
And fill my mind with thoughts of you"
That is a great escape! Thanks for sharing.

Goodknight
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6 posted 2002-08-28 12:02 PM


Sue - this is a wonderful love poem - romance drips from the page as I read - loved it - Paul
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just out of reach
7 posted 2002-08-28 12:14 PM


Beautiful Sue, enjoyed this!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2002-08-28 12:49 PM


Ah, the power of love!
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9 posted 2002-08-28 01:15 PM


Suetang,
The picture is a study in negative space,
but the poem fills it with a warm glow.

Mikey

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10 posted 2002-08-28 03:50 PM


Very good combo here Sue....doing the tango
and the waltz.....with a stunning pic to
match the words...

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