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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-08-27 04:51 PM


I see dark clouds
Out my window
The wind starts to bellow
As the rain pours down
And the ligtning strikes the earth
With a crashing sound.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2002-08-27 04:58 PM


We've all seen that sight.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
2 posted 2002-08-27 05:02 PM


A nice depiction of a thunderstorm...
Welcome back, Julie... its good to see you again.
~ welcome back hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2002-08-27 05:51 PM


Hi Julie You've been missed! It's great to have you back. Now send some rain my way, k?

Enjoyed the poem.

I said so softly
twas lost amid.
A whisper gone
thought now dim.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-08-27 06:05 PM


Poems on the power of nature excite me and this was no exception!
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-08-27 09:32 PM




(smiles) Wow, you must be having some mighty storms brewing over you right now, sweet friend, I know these storms so well too, this is wonderfully detailed, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-27-2002 09:32 PM).]

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