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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-08-27 04:22 PM

I stare
Out into vast space
Conjuring up
The expression on your face
Once I blurted
Out that deep within
I hold a valuable secret
One I hold so dear
One I doubt you shall ever hear
My body sighs
My mind cries
Struggling to compose myself
As my soul is dangling
On this shelf
High above the rest of the world
Afraid to fall
But I'm so dangerously close
Each time I speak to you
Each time I look at you
Each time I dream of you
And each time I cry out for you
Damn my frail little secret...

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-27 04:24 PM

Damn my frail little secret...

We all have them. Nicely put.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-08-27 04:58 PM

I like the way this was put

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-08-27 05:18 PM

Sometimes you just have to lock those secrets into a straitjacket and throw away the key... otherwise, they keep trying to come out...
Beautifully written, Kristin...

~ hugs from the secret chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-27 08:44 PM

(sigh) Yes, sometimes we just have to lock those secrets in, but those that ache us to be shared have to be released carefully! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-08-27 11:02 PM

Nice, nice write. Liked that little bit of "desperate" that I saw in it.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-08-28 12:08 PM

Wistful. I, as well as many of your readers, can identify with feelings such as these that you have so eloquently expressed

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

7 posted 2002-08-30 04:14 PM

Kris..i totally identify.Well put!

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