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If Wishes... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*If Wishes...*~ If wishes made upon a star Would carry me to you And hopes sent on a moonbeam Could suddenly come true I'd be right by your side tonight No longer feeling blue With love to guide us on our way We'd start a life anew ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-27-2002 05:35 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply beautiful. Enjoyed very much. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was good. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
WhiteRose & the_loner_23- Thank you both for the kind words.  This is just something I dug up from a long time ago. I was never able to decide if it was 'done' or not, so I decided to take a chance and go ahead and post it. Thanks for reading. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Vicky, this is sooooo beautifully heartfelt, I too have exact same feelings and wish every night upon a star for Joanna to finally meet me and to make her happy always! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful shining sentiment, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Back on this one to test for 'done'~ Yep ! It is ... and it's just beautiful~ Who's YO BUDDY ?  *HUGS* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Short and sweet.....just right I'd say. Enjoyed. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Very moving emotionally and is poetically superb. Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I like! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Simply beautiful. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If wishes made upon a star Would carry me to you And hopes sent on a moonbeam Could suddenly come true I'd be right by your side tonight No longer feeling blue =============================== Great minds think alike ...I just wrote one about wishing on stars too...if only it was that easy...cuz theres no shortage of stars.This is a tender wistful cadence kissed write poetess Vicky..its good to have you back in the blue pages. In the space between now and then |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this was simply lovely and I couldn't think of one more thing to say that would show love more, not one! So nice. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I am just sitting here, thinking up an answer and I can't find any words that match my thoughts. So I just say WOW It's done, it's cooked and ready to eat..er...read Did I tell you lately that I  ?No???? Well.....I do!!!!!!! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vlraynes - I wish these wishes you write about here come true for you... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ditto....I hope they do as well....Surely, written as this....the wish shall come true.... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very enjoyable and very sweet and romantic, Vicky...  ~ hugs from your chipmunk friendLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Definitely a done deed. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wish the same...but mine never seem to come true *s M |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's one of the nicest poems anyone's ever written to me, Vicky  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very nice, Vicky. I really like it. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
It's 'done' now and I really liked it... If ever in 'doubt' do it again ! Kitty |
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