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Open Poetry #22

Counting Time

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2002-08-27 04:08 PM

There was a time
I could count on you,
run to you through the space of time
and you would be there to comfort me.
And you were all I needed.

Behind the glass, I wait
wondering why these cracks have formed,
how to repair something unseen,
a stream of thought
to be replaced with a softsmile
when all I needed was you.

~A~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-08-27 04:15 PM

I hope your words are giving you a chance to fight out of the ocean under glass, Alice.

Mike

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-08-27 05:01 PM

Very good

Julie

Cold hands means a warm heart

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

3 posted 2002-08-28 07:34 PM

Mike and Julie thank you for your visit

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-09-06 09:49 AM

yeah, I know how it is

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-09-06 11:04 AM

"Behind the glass, I wait"

encased in reflection
though transperancy reigns both
the inside
and the out

nicely done....

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

6 posted 2002-09-06 11:06 AM

Lovely write. It seems full of sadness. Lonely. Nicely done!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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