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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-27 03:21 PM



Something For Me


write
something
for me
set
my mind
to inspire
let me
practice
my desire
let one drop
become
the sea
let it roll
flowing free
can you
do this
task
is it
too much
to ask
satisfy
this
my need
give me
a piece
of your soul
to read


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-08-27 03:52 PM


1slick_lady
give me
a piece
of your soul
to read
That's no easy, enjoyed.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-08-27 05:03 PM


very much enjoyed

Cold hands means a warm heart

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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USA
3 posted 2002-08-27 05:37 PM


enjoyed
secretlife
Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
4 posted 2002-08-27 05:44 PM


Lovely I like it dear,,,


Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
5 posted 2002-08-28 01:26 AM


I am now inspired to write even greater words. And to bump.

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-08-29 04:39 PM


I would write of you
lazing by the calm sea shore
my words inflaming

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2002-08-29 06:45 PM


wonderfully done
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2002-08-29 07:31 PM


helen - I'm working on it...

BC

arthur
Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
9 posted 2002-08-30 12:01 PM


something to work with ?
ok
"all shame is false"
arthur

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