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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-27 11:52 AM



When night arrives upon the step
nature displays a warm sunset.
Colors soft caress the eye,
the beauty of a southern sky.

Tranquil are my thoughts just then
when site upon this shaded blend
of hues so soft, a color sigh.
A breath of tone, before the night.

Imprinted on hungry memory
to take into the dark with me.

WhiteRose

Touch me with your whispers,
and I'll listen with my heart.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-27 12:24 PM


Wonderful...especially the last two lines...what a lovely thought!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-08-27 05:04 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-08-27 08:33 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love sunsets so much as their beautiful colors always explode with promises! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love yo so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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