»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #22
»
Forever is not too long
| Open Poetry #22 |
|
Forever is not too long |
|
|
powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
A passionate outcry of the love I feel towards you erupts from deep within my outstretched arms every memory of you that captivates my senses diminishes the pain I have felt up to this day The next time you reach out to embrace me you will surely feel the pounding of my heart I will cherish each day we are given together until the winds of eternity carry us away The trail of honor is always boldly enlightened by the truth that ultimately will set us free the torch I set ablaze to guide your way must also brighten the paths upon my own quest I vividly see how the serenity in your eyes has tamed the firestorm once raging in my mind holding firmly onto the gift you have given me as I bask in the radiance with which I was blessed My shortfalls have existed with a steadfast fear of the darkness overwhelming the impending nightfall I started my journey to find an angel in the stars only to end up chasing shadows in the skies of blue Although my wings of hope at times became weary I still anticipated the moment you would appear knowing that forever is not too long to wait for the chance to spend just one lifetime with you Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Paul V. Campos - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, yes, yes, powerful words, here! I think you could say that it's the Poweroftheword that sets this piece ablaze. Some super phrases herein are exciting. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
||
|
powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thanx VAS, I wrote this one for my girlfriend and I hope she likes it too. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Although my wings of hope at times became weary I still anticipated the moment you would appear knowing that forever is not too long to wait for the chance to spend just one lifetime with you"   (smiles) Oh Paul, this is sooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, all it takes is faith for love to come true and while I someties hurt yearning for my love Joanna, I have hope someday I will finally have her and be happy with her forever! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Ohhhhhhhhhh I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
|
powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thank you Noah, I really appreciate your comments, you are just about the nicest person I have ever come across. My girlfriend has not yet read this, I plan to propose to her this weekend, I just bought her a ring and all that is left is a "yes" answer from her! Wish me luck. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
