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Guardurthoughts
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0 posted 2002-08-26 11:47 PM



The book of a poet unknown lies beside her bed.
Its pages filled with all the wonder of her thoughts unsaid.

All over, the pages she bears her heart, she lets her mind unfold,
And she places her love in the safety of this hold.

Each note is smudged with the ink of a tear stained soul.
Only the blackest will do, so she writes with coal.

Her story is twisted between the letters, between each dot and line.
Her life is strung around these edges; Her secrets kept in this confine.

Again, the book of her desires is safely tucked beneath her covers.
Where it shall rest, until her shadow once again hovers.
~~~~
sorry if this is a repost couldnt remeber if I had posted it or not

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

© Copyright 2002 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-27 01:08 AM


yes, some good images here of a "poet."

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Tammy Blessing
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2 posted 2002-08-27 10:54 AM


Have you been peeking under my bed??!! Sounds an awful lot like my journal!! Gosh, I hope not...Some of those "blackest" thoughts are just not fit for public view!! LOL  Nice write. BTW-Love your nicname!
Peace,Love, and Happiness
Tammy

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3 posted 2002-08-27 11:33 AM


Guardurthoughts
Excellent write, I enjoyed the read.

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-08-27 04:34 PM


Very well written. A picture of a poet's thoughts. Enjoyed
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5 posted 2002-08-27 09:47 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Erica, I know these feelings all too well, poetry is indeed a true companion of all our hearts and helps us to express ourselves and make light of these mysterious shadows! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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6 posted 2002-08-27 09:47 PM


Great expression

Cold hands means a warm heart

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7 posted 2002-08-28 07:57 PM


I have a book just so
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8 posted 2002-08-28 09:45 PM


Erica~
Until the advent of sharing poetry on the Internet became a reality ... I think we all did the 'spirals'~

Had so many tucked away ...
I doubt they'd fit under my bed today~
But, ya' know what ?
I STILL love to spend the time going back through those journals of the past~

Thanks for a nostalgic reminder~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-08-29 12:57 PM


If this poem is a repost, I for one am glad that it was reposted! Loved it!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Little_White_Flowers
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10 posted 2002-08-29 10:51 PM


have you been under my bed lately? lol I have a book just like that thanks for the great write
Suetang
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11 posted 2002-08-30 12:19 PM


Hello Erica

I know I am one of many who keep a writing book with me at all times, even next to my bed at night, in case an idea comes in the dead of night.  I really like the way you wrote this and I could relate to much of it.

Take care.....Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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