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The Most Beautiful Sunset
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The Most Beautiful Sunset |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Lofty clouds adorn the blissful evening sky, Outlined by the dazzling radiance of the suns golden hue, Its silhouette rippling gently on the waters shimmering surface, The sky's flame gracefully retreats to its welcoming paradise on the horizon. Like clawmarks of purple and crimson, the colours rip through the sky's fabric, Streaming across gods palette, leaving trails of it's semi bristled paint, Screaming an unheard symphony of lavender and a purplish haze, Like a formless rainbow, tinting the heavens. Slowly the beauteous blazen beast disappears, Like a golden eye beneath a closing lid, Such splendid perfection in all my years, Had up till now from my eyes been hid. In humble adoration I thank the divine artist, For the chance to admire this view full onset, Tasting life within life I drank to it's fullest, Awe-filled and inspired by the most beautiful sunset. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wow I saw that sunset I swear. I so love sunsets  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Do you live in Michigan, Gabriel? Our late summer sunsets are often like that... I love your imagery here...  ~ hugs from a Michigan chipmunkLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, oh my gosh, sunsets like these always make me smile to know God can create such magic for us all nas you bring the magic to your wonderful words, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gabriel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
I would say you live in Arizona, we have some beautiful sunsets over here too. Thanx for sharing your work with everyone. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Such a beautiful piece...you've painted the picture well enough for me to see. I'd say your Canadian? as Canadian sunsets are perhaps the world's finest Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
My my my...I have such a michievous feeling, to keep you all in suspense...LOL! But really, it seems that your guesses have all come up way short of the truth.LOL! Michigan?...Arizona?...Canada? Why not even America, my friends...I have no doubts about your beautiful sunsets, but I am actually from a little Island in the caribbean, called Trinidad! I dunno if you've heard of it, but it's pretty near Venezuela! It's A lovely place and i honestly wish that i could take you all here with me, if even only for a day! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yes, I've heard of Trinidad and Tobago...it's one of the places I've always wanted to visit, it sounds like such an exuberant and exotic country "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Gabriel Your words painted a most extraordinary picture which left this reader with a sense of calm. Fabulous imagery! I'll look forward reading more from you. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Thanks everyone.Oh and Trinidad is a exotic place, you were right.I look forward to adding new work as i find the time |
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